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of our document here.

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and let's go to the next thing we can do

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so we can change the tone.

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So, let's go ahead and see what happens here,

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let's go with professional

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and we're going to add this, insert it below,

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and let's highlight this again.

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And we can go ahead

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and ask it to change the tone

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to, let's say, more friendly.

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And we'll go ahead and add this.

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And by the way, while it's generating,

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you can hit R to try again

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or Escape for it to stop generating

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if you're seeing that it's doing something

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that you don't want it to do.

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So, let's go ahead and insert this one below.

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So, we have our original here,

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our friendly version here,

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and our more professional version on the bottom.

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Let's go ahead and create a space here.

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And let's go ahead and read our original,

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so, "Final Assignment Feedback and Q&A Day Nine.

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After this incredible crash course

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in upgrading your cinematography, lighting, and sound,

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you'll apply everything you've learned

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into one epic video for feedback

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for myself and your fellow students!

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So, synthesizing the new skillset,

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understanding the techniques learned throughout the course,

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getting live and in-depth feedback

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from teacher and fellow students,

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deepening your understanding

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by watching the other students final video projects,

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feeling inspired and well equipped

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to continue your progress beyond this training."

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it kept the headline the same, which is interesting.

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And now, let's go into the friendly one.

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So, "Hey there! It's time for some awesome stuff.

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You've just completed an incredible crash course

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in cinematography, lighting, and sound.

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Now, it's time to put

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everything you've learned into practice

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and create one epic video.

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You'll get feedback from me and fellow students,

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so don't be shy.

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Here's what you can expect."

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And let's see if it changed any of the wording here,

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I'm just gonna scan it with my eyes.

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Get live feedback, fellow students,

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deepen your understanding by watching and feel inspired,

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let's do this.

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So, it looks like it changed the paragraph,

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made it more friendly by adding, "Hey there, don't be shy,"

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and all those little changes.

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so I'd be interested to see if it did the same down here.

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And then, added a, "Let's do this,"

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a friendly let's do this at the end of the bullet points.

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So, now let's go to the more professional change in tone,

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"After this intensive course," okay, intensive,

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"on upgrading your cinematography, lighting, and sound,

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you'll have the opportunity

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to apply everything you've learned to create one epic video.

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You'll receive feedback from me

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as well as your fellow students."

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So, yeah, a little bit more of tight,

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straight to the point writing style.

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in the bullet point here, so let's see,

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"Synthesize the new skillset,

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understandings, and techniques that you've learned

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throughout the course,

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receive live and in-depth feedback

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from both your teacher and your peers,"

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so it looks like it changed the word

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fellow students from peers,

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which is a slightly more proper term to use,

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which doesn't surprise me there.

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It looks like it replaced from other students

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with your classmates.

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And then lastly, "Feel inspired

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and well equipped to continue your progress

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beyond this training,"

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versus, "Feeling inspired and equipped

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to continue your progress,"

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so well equipped, just slightly a little bit more proper.

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to your audience,

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and this is where the AI tools have the most benefit.

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But really the cool thing is,

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is that you're able to just save so much time.

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Like I could do this entire document for a certain client,

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boom, write it, it's done, it's perfect, it's ready to go.

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to 10 other clients,

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but I wanna make it feel like I'm not just spamming

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and sending the same content to a bunch of people,

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I can make it so much more personalized

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(clicks fingers) like the speed of the light

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with something like this.

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So, it's really interesting

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being able to change the tonality.

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Now, let's look at the simplifying the language function.

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I have our professional text highlighted,

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this was the third example that we did.

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I'm gonna click Ask AI,

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and I'm gonna go to simplify language.

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Okay, and one thing I really like about this Notion AI,

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it's pretty quick.

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I mean, it does this so rapidly.

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Let's go ahead and insert this below,

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and let's see the changes that it made.

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So, "After this intensive course

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on improving your video-making skills,"

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so interesting, it said instead of

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after this intensive course on upgrading

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your cinematography, it decided to put more simple words,

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so improving your video making skills.

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So, less detail and more of a broad term

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for the simplified language.

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"You'll get to use what you learn to make a great video,

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and you'll get feedback from me and your classmates,"

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so super bare bones, very simple.

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It took out the word epic, it took out about opportunity,

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and just overall really simplified it.

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And it looks like it did the same exact thing

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for the bullet points.

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So, rather than "Synthesizing your new skillset,

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understandings, and techniques,"

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it said, "Use what you learned to make your video,"

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so very much like third grade,

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second grade learning level or comprehension level

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is looking like what this specific function does.

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"Get feedback from your teacher and classmates,"

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versus, "Receive live and in-depth feedback

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from both your teacher and your peers."

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"Watch your classmates final videos"

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versus, "Deepen your understanding

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by watching the final video projects."

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It still does a good job of keeping the essence

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of what's actually being said

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and does a great job of remixing it

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to be more appropriate for what you're looking for,

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depending on which AI functionality you're clicking on.

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So, in the next lesson,

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we're gonna dive even deeper

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into these different functionalities.